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Popeman and choir boy (Part 2)

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    1. My new deciple

    Whilst eating John Paul asks Jesus 'so what do you think of the food, pretty good, right ?' just as Jesus is thinking of an answer a Muslim man enters. Jesus screams and hides under the table getting flashbacks to earlier 'sorry no alcohol is allowed in the building' 'you'll need to dispose of your wine' then he starts making up flashbacks 'alah ackbar!' he grabs the wine and smashes it on the ground '. We see jesus hiding in terror under the table silently crying. John puts his head under to see whats wrong' master. What's the problem 'Jesus points to the man getting served' them. They are the problem They want to destroy our way of living. Someone needs to stop them 'Jesus looks up to John Paul' you need to stop them '. John Paul nods his head.

    2. Investigation

    John Paul's room is covered in photos of Muslim related things. 'sure there's some mad ones, but the majority seem nice. Look we've even got ones here tying up our streets from tree homeless scum. I'm sorry master but I can't see the evil you see' as Jesus looks at the pictures he hears the sounds of the flashbacks again. 'sorry. No alcahol is allowed inside' 'you'll need to dispose of your bottle' 'alah akbar! Smash' tears pour down his face. 'my wine. They took away my wine. I'm nothing without my wine' then it clicks for John. The almighty gains his powers from drinking wine. If they take away his powers, they can get away with anything. But what's the Master plan? Can they still be defeated whilst Jesus is like this? Surely John will need some help if he hopes to get to the bottom of this. 'We need help. And I know just the boy for the job. Quick Jesus. Come with me'

    3. Choir Boy

    We see a young boy in class. He gets given back his exam and we can see he's a smart kid A+. 'Great Job Fredrick' 'Thank you Sir'. Just then the door bursts open. It's John Paul and Jesus. 'Frederick we need you.'the teacher angrily looks at them and screams' What the hell do you think you're doing? I'm teaching a class here. You're not his parents. Why do you need the boy? 'John looks back with even more anger' this is a matter of biblical proportions wait. '' now Freddy. Come 'Freddy packs his stuff and starts to leave. His teacher places his hand on his shoulder. John Paul then punches the teacher on the jaw knocking him to the floor.'. The rest of the kids cheer and start causing chaos as John Paul and Freddy run out the building. The hall monitor tries to stop them but he's no match for John Paul who gives him a swift kick to the face. They finally reach the front door, but the head teacher is there. 'Excuse me gentlemen, but I can't let you leave

    Step out this building and the authorities will be called' just then the doors swing open knocking the head teacher down. It's Jesus 'get in the motor now. I'm sick ae waiting on you' all three run to the car. John Paul then intruduces the two 'Jesus Freddy, Freddy Jesus.' Freddy looks puzzled 'that's Jesus?' 'yes. But he's lost his powers. Long story, anyway that's why we need you. The muslamic extreemests took it and we need to know why.'

    We see a young boy in class. He gets given back his exam and we can see he's a smart kid A+. 'Great Job Fredrick' 'Thank you Sir'. Just then the door bursts open. It's John Paul and Jesus. 'Frederick we need you.'the teacher angrily looks at them and screams' What the hell do you think you're doing? I'm teaching a class here. You're not his parents. Why do you need the boy? 'John looks back with even more anger' this is a matter of biblical proportions School can

    4. Hope you're still enjoying the story.

    Still first draft. If you like the concept please let me know in the comments.

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