Popeman update ideas

It's been fun tweaking my story to make it better. What else could I do?

1. Church

John Paul first meets jesus in the church. He notices the similarity between the bum and the stained glass window. Is there any other similarities I could add?

Maybe Jesus could be 'floating' as his gown is catched onto the window. This would mean no crash and I'd have to think of anything way to alert John Paul. I don't think this would work.

This is difficult I'll continue to think about this.

2. Evolution

I liked the short segment of evolution based jokes when Francis is introduced. Maybe I could add more or touch them up.

3. Fights

The flights at the end aren't that dramatic. Maybe I could read up on how to write fight scenes better then use that knowledge to improve them. What makes a good fight scene?

RoccoDesta

Popeman update ideas

1. Church

2. Evolution

3. Fights

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