Teacher!

Practice for the stand up set I've been working on. I hope you enjoy. Appreciate any advice on how to improve it.

Thanks.

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J4London @J4London

Hi Rocco, It's interesting stuff but more storytelling than standup. Not a lot of laugh lines, and a bit too much "I'm the best teacher in China" repetition. I think for standup you'd need a lot more jokes along the way: something funny about the competition, something funny about the school, etc. I like the dog/duck segment, but it's also funny that there'll be a bunch of kids in China speaking English with a Scots accent.

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roccodesta @roccodesta

Thanks. My brother said the same thing about the humour. I'll try and add a bit more jokes to the story. I'll make an update once I do

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